[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2009 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
its a really nice chapter, i am a bit worried that your making jason a bit to helpless but i really liked it and am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: i'm sorry for making jason a bit helpless, but he's just the perfect angst victim and every victim needs his savior, which is where david comes into the picture. thanks for reading.
Date: 15 Nov 2008 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, another lovely piece. I'm happily working my way through the archive and ignoring my NaNo fic... EEP!
Author's Response: thanks, hawk. your feedback is much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2008 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, this was so sweet. I loved it.
Jason's middle name is spelled wrong, though. It's Rene...:)
Author's Response: fixed it! thank you for pointing that out and thank you for reading.
Date: 15 Sep 2008 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1
This was sad! Hooray for David though. I love stories where David protects Jason - I dont know why but its so sweet!
Author's Response: thank you. as an angst writer, i like hurt/comfort fics...jason getting hurt and david comforting jason so i love it when david rescues jason.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2008 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww...luv it :)
Author's Response: thank you:-)
Date: 14 Sep 2008 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was so beautiful! Poor eyelashes, I want to give him a hug... fantastically written.
Author's Response: thanks for reading and thanks for the feedback.
Date: 14 Sep 2008 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was so sad. i felt terrible for Jason. David is so sweet. I'm extremely happy he went back for Jase. The ending was cute too.
Author's Response: i'm happy david went back for jason, too. thanks for reading and thanks for commenting.