[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2009 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 16
You.Killed.Carly???????OMG....
This was so sad! And now I don't know if I want Carlos apprehended, not if it means hurt for J...
But nice writing.Well done.
Author's Response: i know. i killed carly:-( i'm definitely going to miss her b/c she was so much fun to write, but her death was pivotal for the story to move forward.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2009 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 16
Yeah - another chapter! Thank you!
Author's Response: you're welcome. and much thanks for reading. thank you!
Date: 06 Mar 2009 09:02 am Title: Chapter I
Squeeeing though I haven't had a chance to read this yet. :) I am just so happy you are still writing this. Things are just getting interesting! Will leave real feed back after reading.
Author's Response: of course, i'm still writing this story:-) just had to take a break and tackle other works in progress, but will always return 'deep penetration'. thanks for your support.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2009 01:51 am Title: Chapter 15
Glad to read the latest chapter - looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thanks for reading and even greater thanks for leaving feedback. i, too, am looking forward to writing more so hopefully a new chapter will be up. thanks for the support.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2009 09:11 am Title: Chapter 14
I liked seeing Jason assert himself in this chapter. Ihope his trust in Yeager isn't missed placed! And though Carlo is a bad guy, I like his protectiveness of his grandson.
Author's Response: hi, jaelyn. thanks for reading and leaving feedback. jason isn't always the self defenseless pretty boy in this fic. and carlos isn't really a bad guy in this fic either. anywhoo, thanks a bunch! will update soon.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2008 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ohhhh! Good chapter! You know I hate Yeager and like him at the same time. He better take good care of Jase or else I'll go Ssir Carlos on him! :D
Author's Response: i feel the same way about yeager. sometimes i don't like him very much and sometimes i like him a lot. next chapter is coming up. thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2008 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ohhh. Now why do I get the feeling that bad things are going to happen at this party? I so love this fic. And David's back! reading this is like watching a television show. :) Nice work.
Author's Response: david is indeed back. he might disappear here and there, however, 'deep penetration' is a david cook vehicle driven novel so now that he's returned, he'll be in the driving seat and propelling the story forward. about the party...you'll have to wait and see:-)
Date: 06 Dec 2008 01:42 am Title: Chapter 11
Now I am worried about Jason....nice building of suspense...next chapter please. :)
Author's Response: thank you always. i've been so distracted these days with all things castro, but i hope to return to writing soon. thanks for the feedback.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2008 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
ohhhhh! I'm worried about Carly! I love you for posting this chapter so quickly!
Author's Response: thanks, jaelyn. i only have a handful of chapters completed, but your continual feedback is motivation enough to pick up the story, again. thanks, sweetie:-)
Date: 03 Nov 2008 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
More DP! This was a sweet chapter.:) I am already ready for 10. :)
Author's Response: thank you, jaelyn. it was a bit short, but i hope it sufficed. next chapter coming up soon although i'm so distracting right now by jason's new song, 'sweet medicine'.
Date: 26 Oct 2008 09:42 am Title: Chapter 8
i really love this! please update soon!=)
Author's Response: update is coming up soon. thanks for reading and even bigger thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2008 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aphrodite, this is such a well done story. Not the typical fanfiction at all! You always leave me eagerly waiting for the next chapter. You plot so well!
Author's Response: thanks, jaelyn. i'll try to post a new chapter very soon.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2008 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
really nice story. I love howyou build the suspence. I can't wait to see how this all works out.
Author's Response: nice for the feedback. i have the storyline plotted out. hopefully, it won't disappoint many.
Author's Response: thanks for the feedback. i have the storyline plotted out. hopefully, it won't disappoint many.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2008 03:14 am Title: Chapter 3
i simply can't wait till the next chapter. writing can be a pain in the butt, but please bear with it and continue soon ;P
Author's Response: i absolutely love writing when i have the time, but i've been working so much lately that there's not enough time sit, relax, and become inspired by your muse. but i'm trying. luckily, i have quite a few chapters already in the can so an update will be soon. thanks.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2008 10:59 am Title: Chapter I
AHHHHHHHHHHH! All the emotion! This was wonderful and there had better be more soon!
Author's Response: thanks, sarah, for commenting. the next chapter should be posted as soon as i have a few more chapters in the can:-)
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2008 06:37 am Title: Chapter I
Just one request :) next chapter soon? Great writing & plot!
Author's Response: hey, sweetie. thanks for reading. i've completed 12 chapters thus far so i'm quite confident i'll finish this tale although once upon a time many moons ago i wrote 34 chapters for one boyband slash story and never finished it. here's hoping my muse sticks around to harass me. that being said, i'll post a new chapter very soon.
Date: 07 Sep 2008 05:56 am Title: Chapter I
Damn! This is sooo exciting! I am loving every moment of it and am craving for more!
So, on a side note, what are the pairings like, if there are any?
Author's Response: ayu, thanks for your feedback, hon. as for the pairings, there will be many but rest assure jason will be in one of those of pairings:-)