Date: 13 Mar 2010 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 1/1
I didn't understand this story at all. The ending made little sense, did Adam fuck Jason and hurt him? Also the overtly "porny" language is a turn off. phallus? really? LOL
Author's Response: phallus is a 'porny' language? didn't know that as i've been writing 'phallus' for many years. will take note next time.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 03:33 am Title: Chapter 1/1
Hey welcome back! Yet another quaint mixture of pleasure and pain.
Author's Response: thank you. and bear with me. i just need to get this series out of my system then i'll be returning to cookstro, once, again:-)