Date: 18 Jul 2009 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
So glad to see you update your fic - the party should be interesting:)
Date: 25 Jun 2009 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm a bit confused how this passage fits with the next part of your fic?..."Kris opened his door to find Jason on the couch, eyes livid .
"WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU..." Thump! Kris threw himself at Jason and cut off his air before he could finish his sentance, and they were locked in a bonecrushing embrace. Jason's arms encased Kris protectively , and Kris knew he had found real comfort and he never wanted to let go." I'm not sure what the focus is - a bit disjointed and so very little dialogue. Maybe I just need to read more of the story to come to understand:)I really like the idea of Kris/Jason fics.
Author's Response: I might have mistyped. I usually just copy and paste from lj. I have a show today, but I will definately go and make sure its less disjointed. Thanks for letting me know!
Date: 03 Jun 2009 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1 and 2
Oh I hope there is more Jason in the next chapter:)
Author's Response: definately next chapter is all Krastro
Date: 01 Jun 2009 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
As always - wonderful imagery and flow:) I want more now!:)
Date: 30 May 2009 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
At first I thought - wow she sure skipped a lot and than I was very pleasantly surprised at the last line! This was great!
Date: 27 May 2009 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Such sweet imagery with Jason sleeping with his guitar. This story is certainly progressing well - can't wait for it to continue:)
Date: 25 May 2009 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Really nice flow to your writing:)
Date: 25 May 2009 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1 and 2
Looking forward to reading more soon:)
Date: 24 May 2009 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 and 2
Glad you decided to accept the mod's invite and post here too :) I'm def interested in seeing where this is going. In this story, it seems, Kris knows he is gay/bi! And then you say that the relationship between Kris and Adam fractured at the core... so very, very interested. Hope you have a chance to update soon!