[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2009 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
So glad to see you update your fic - the party should be interesting:)
Date: 25 Jun 2009 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm a bit confused how this passage fits with the next part of your fic?..."Kris opened his door to find Jason on the couch, eyes livid .
"WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU..." Thump! Kris threw himself at Jason and cut off his air before he could finish his sentance, and they were locked in a bonecrushing embrace. Jason's arms encased Kris protectively , and Kris knew he had found real comfort and he never wanted to let go." I'm not sure what the focus is - a bit disjointed and so very little dialogue. Maybe I just need to read more of the story to come to understand:)I really like the idea of Kris/Jason fics.
Author's Response: I might have mistyped. I usually just copy and paste from lj. I have a show today, but I will definately go and make sure its less disjointed. Thanks for letting me know!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2009 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1 and 2
Oh I hope there is more Jason in the next chapter:)
Author's Response: definately
next chapter is all Krastro
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2009 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
As always - wonderful imagery and flow:) I want more now!:)
Date: 31 May 2009 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
damn! what a tease! for us, the readers, and the boys:-)
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2009 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
At first I thought - wow she sure skipped a lot and than I was very pleasantly surprised at the last line! This was great!
Date: 28 May 2009 12:58 am Title: Chapter 3
oh, don't stop there. we want to know what the boys will do once they get to kris's house. i'm so happy the wifey is out of the picture and now the girlfriend:-)
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2009 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Such sweet imagery with Jason sleeping with his guitar. This story is certainly progressing well - can't wait for it to continue:)
Date: 27 May 2009 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
I was skeptical about the pairing but I must say, you've intrigued me.
I look forward to more. :)
Date: 25 May 2009 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 and 2
very promising start. poor kris. i hope he can find happiness with jason. can't wait for the hot boy on boy action:-)
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2009 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Really nice flow to your writing:)
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2009 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1 and 2
Looking forward to reading more soon:)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2009 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 and 2
Glad you decided to accept the mod's invite and post here too :) I'm def interested in seeing where this is going. In this story, it seems, Kris knows he is gay/bi! And then you say that the relationship between Kris and Adam fractured at the core... so very, very interested. Hope you have a chance to update soon!