Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2009 12:34 am Title: Chapter 16

When is the next update? I love this fic!!!

Author's Response: I have to start off with the next chapter because my computer went all screwy on me. :( So...yeah...I have to start ALL over. Sucks. :(

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2009 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 16

Jason's hilarious! I laughed at his mistake because I could totally see him doing something like that in real life! Not even realizing he picked up Playgirl. lol.

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2009 10:13 am Title: Chapter 16

hahaha! My favorite scene by far!!

Author's Response:

I always crack up when I watch that part of the film. How the body sits in plain view of the trooper but he's too busy looking at porn to even care. Writing Jason's thoughts to it were my favorite part to write in that chapter. :)

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2009 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 15

Awwww!!! I'm so glad you updated, I've missed this story so much!

Author's Response: Sorry I kept you waiting! My next update is almost complete! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2009 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 14

This is hilarious. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! LMS is one of my fave movies! :) I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2009 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 13

Love Jackie in this! She's adorable in this fic. :) And so is everyone else, of courss.:)

Author's Response: I like Jackie, too. She is pretty adorable. And everyone is pretty awesome, too! :) Glad you like my fic!

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2009 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 14

Awww! There were tears in my eyes by the end. I think the last line was my very favorite, and i loved the thought of Syesha as the bereavement liason. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

The death was my favorite part to write so far and I think it's one of the most moving parts in the whole movie. And when I saw the part of Linda the bereavement liaison, I was like, "That's Syesha!" :)

 I am so happy you're enjoying this! More to come! :)

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2009 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh no!!! I'm kinda dreading/excited about the next chapter :)

Thanks for posting!!

Author's Response:

"Dreading"? ahaha. :) But seriously, glad you like this chapter. :)

You're welcome! I love writing this fic! :)

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2009 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 12

Awww Michael's sooo sweet!
I kinda don't want to read the next chapter now, cause i know what's coming, but i won't be able to stop myself. :)

Author's Response: I'm gonna a little sad when I start the next update, but I'm not gonna quit! :) I'm kinda looking forward to writing it actually. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2009 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 11

Aww! haha loved your interpretation of this scene :)

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm going to continue to update this fic, I swear! :)

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2009 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 10

yay! thanks for updating! Haha don't worry about the delay...i've been having the same problem. :)

Author's Response: Writer's block totally sucks, for real! I'm not a good multitasker. haha.

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2009 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 9

haha that was hysterical! Nice, long chapter too! Thanks! :)

Author's Response: That was my favorite part of the movie, too! :) And I like long chapters...but not too long, though...:lol: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Lena Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2008 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 9

Can I just say I thought this part was the most funniest part EVER? I cracked up picturing everyone pushing the bus and then running into it! Jason makes my day throughtout this whole entire chapter! Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Hey, Lenaa! The bus part cracks me up, too! :) And I agree with you on Jason...he's love in this fic. I love turning him into Frank in this fic. :lol:

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2008 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 7

lol this was a great chapter :D!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! :) :)

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2008 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 6

Haha you made David such a prick... good choice for Richard, I can totally see it! Haha I went back and watched LMS again and I saw your characters instead of the regular ones :) Great chapter!

Author's Response: I rewatched the movie, too and I envisioned the Idols and Jackie instead of the original cast members! :) I'm glad you liked this chapter! I'm working on more! :)

Reviewer: aphrodite Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2008 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 5

i know it's an ensemble cast, but i really like this chapter b/c jason's in alot of the dialogue. i'm just thinking to myself here...maybe after "A Family On The Verge Of A Breakdown" you should write another movie inspired fic with jason as the lead character:-)

Author's Response: Hmmm...not a bad idea...it's actually brilliant! I just need some ideas, though! lol.

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2008 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awesome chapter! Write more quickly! haha no pressure! :)

Author's Response: I'm gonna continue, so don't worry! haha! Glad you're likin' it!

Reviewer: aphrodite Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2008 12:25 am Title: Chapter 4

glad you reposted it. can't wait for the next chapter even though i've seen the movie:-)

Author's Response: I've just posted the next chapter! Enjoy! :) I love the movie...it's one of my favorites!

Reviewer: RiverSorrowDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2008 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yay! Another great chapter...a thought crossed my mind, though, that i didn't comment on yet. Does the setup mean Michael's going to die? *heart breaks*. Haha I'll still love it though, i'm sure.

Author's Response:

You commented the first time, but then, when the site went down, your original review vanished along with my original post. :( Oh, well...glad you liked the last chapter!

 And to answer your question, yes, Mike does die. :(

Reviewer: aphrodite Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2008 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1

such a great movie this novel is based on. you are the queen of remakes!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm glad you like it so far! I love writing movie fics!



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